My Father Is My Mate Komentarze

Sigrún María

Hi, great book. How often do you update it? 🥰

Aphrodite

Thanks to the comments! I was going to start this book! Sorry author! bbye!👋👋

hollybobz

I’m really confused because it keeps jumping from one thing to another and doesn’t make sense 😫

Gram

this book is so slow at getting anywhere. can’t keep up with all the changes

Rena D

I've not read the book yet but I can see the comments. They are rude and unfair. I'll read your book and I pray that you get success in your book journey. I'll try my best to read this book but I'm honestly very busy but I'll make time. Dont give up. You'll prosper in the name of Jesus. Lots of love darling

Pricilla Carter

this is awful. I couldn't get passed the Grammer the fact it starts with her in the house then shes at school.

Stephanie Godin Duval

Chrisis is not her father, maybe her mother already had a child when they met.

Stephanie Godin Duval

I am really having a hard time keeping track of what is going on. this book is all over the place.

Wendy Mansfield

if my friends were like hers. I'd get new ones

Kendra Cook

I just can't follow what is supposed to be going on. Having a good idea for a story isn't enough, you have to be able to write it well enough for people to have even the slightest clue what's going on. You are supposed to be painting scenery, characters, interactions, and story lines with words. It's supposed to flow and make sense, not be disjointed and erratic. My kid just learned about all of this in 4th grade. This story is impossible to follow. It was an interesting story idea, but...... 🤷🏼‍♀️

Amber Chighizola

Its so confusing. The story keeps changing

Becca Marie

This doesn't make sense. April would've been 6 yrs old when Chris turned 18. She would've been old enough to know his parents were mom and dad. Also, Chris should be 30 now that April is 18. Ugh! How on earth would April just act as if Chris was her dad this whole time when she was old enough to know better? Come on author get your story right!

Michelle Wong

She's 18 and her father, Chris, is in his early 20's. Okay. 😁

Donnie Hill-Barry

im on chapter 11 and its alot going on in this book, I'm confused on some parts. the story line was interesting but I think im calling it quits.

Syl Xiao Lin

I thought this story was complete. My bad. Please post the updated soon.

What the actual f**k?

North Rose 🌹

This book is very poorly edited. Run on sentences, missing commas, just bad punctuation. Then the FL is so rude to everyone. I feel like the book was writen in another language then very badly translated.

Ali K

those were my good seeing eyes