The Returned Luna टिप्पणियाँ

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lovely story

Drivers Education Training School

Thankyou so much for a wonderful story, a story that focused on the happenings of the characters and for once not full of sex scenes. It's a story of substance, I hope you can write another like this again. 5 Stars from me.

Angela Parks

I'll be honest I almost dropped it at the beginning when she was wishy washy. Hang in there. Totally worth it.

Karen Nieman

Oh Boy! stuff is going to hit the fan when he finds out where her room is!

Read Feeder

#50%offread Dear Basil, how that crow taste?! ..If he doesn’t treat you right, date/marry the man that raised him 🤣

CoconutPixie

#50%offread He didn't treat her right, discarded her, and she died. Now she gets a new life and his daddy gets to clap those cheeks...epic

Switch Fix

#50%offread I just want to be a fly on the wall when she runs into her ex with his dad. I hope he notices right away and is crushed!!!

Dana

i have only read a few chapters and i think it is a good book…i look forward to reading further and learning what she will do and if she will meet her husband from her past life #bingeread

John Robinson

6s 7a What a start to a story poor sweet Laura, what a nasty mate she's better off without him. Hoping she gets her happily ever and a better second chance mate.

Michibeba

#6s7a# This sounds like a good second chance/redemption story, I am hoping that even though her mate is her ex father-in-law that there is a reason to him not having waited for her, his true mate.

Donna Pember

#6s7a# I just added this book to my reading list. I can't wait to read it.

Kat Waters

6s7a this was such a great book he sure learned he had a great luna but only to late to bad she had to die but was reborn n2 his father's mate karma can get u

Kitty-694016

6s7a. this is a book on my to be read list. This challenge is causing that list to grow!

Awurabena Afriyie Asare

#6s7a# this book is now on my top list. the characters are challenging in all aspects. i believe the girl would be happy at the end.

Vicki usher

6s7a# I had to add this book to my collect as it seems to have a bit of everything. A strong female, betrayal and of course a second chance mate.

6s7a #6s7a this story have good comments. I'm looking forward to reading it. I'm adding it to my reading list

Kerry Graham

6S7A I have enjoyed it so far and looking forward to how the story evolves and what happens

Hayley louise

6s7a have read this story before it's a second chance redemption story. With a strong female lead. Good read.

Iris Valles

#6s7a# Such a good read highly recommend this book to anyone who likes books with a strong female lead and with a good redemption story line

Alexis Bail

is this story complete? i have come across a lot of stories that said complete but they are not

Sandra Kazlaskas

how would they have a staffing shortage with all the festivities Basil & the ministers kept throwing aND Basil insisting that there would be no position open for Laura/Laurel in the castle? Not feasible! Sarah’s role would be to help Laurel as approved by King Adolp.

tina preston

have read this story on another site. excellent reading, you won't be disappointed.

debi harley

I have read this story over 10 times and still love it.

Diana Belford

I would like to slap her

Carol Taylor

would definitely love to read about Eden he really needs a mate this book was so good great story line

Elsie Badenhorst

I love the first 9 chapters, cant wait to read more.

Gail Gilliam

kq7ku

Klara-KK

is this book completed?

Maiden0110

Is ch 174, Jack, the last chapter? Maybe I've been spoiled by final chapters being labeled as epilogues, or burned by this author apparently abandoning her stories...

Vivi Tay

after torn then you regreted and fantasi to wearing it before you wanted to return it to d kibg, too much drama this laura

Diana Dsouza

loved the book.... I truly enjoyed reading it!!!

Reader-804123

loved this book so for

Cathleen Cox

loved the book please write a sequel!!!!!!!

Julie Black

Fantastic book. I really enjoyed it.

Maffie Mangaoang

Oh Eden .. should have a mate too

CharlieV96

tbh If I were here I would curse Basils lineage 👀

Tiffany Oswalt

so far so good! just wondering if you have any idea how long this book will be?

Klara-KK

is this book completed?

Lori Platz

she needs to get over basil. she feels on it too much

Valerie Newman

who is Arthur? I thought his name was adolph

Zinzi Trisha Gceba Fraser

love the book

Angelica Nicole Johnson

Funny how Delia STILL thinks that dress was hers!! 😂 What an idiot

676lucy

upto chapter 37 and the further I read the more annoyed I get with Laurel 😒

Reader-315135

Great book！

Brittney Allen

loved it from. beginning to end👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Angelica Nicole Johnson

Lmao!!! Basil thinks he can tell his father what to do like he is king? Laughable!!

Brittany Roberts

This book was just wow! I read the comments along the way and found a lot of disregard for you as an author. It was as if they expected the book to be written exactly the same way as every other werewolf novel out there, at the same pace and with the same story plot. I, however, found your nobel to be an extremely nice change to the werewolf novel. It was less about the werewolf side (though you did incorporate them throughout the story) and more about the people within in the story. While it first, I believed after Laura was reincarnated the story seems to progress slowly, but the end I had to say I understand why. So much time, effort and consideration went into the introduction, development and growth of each character that without the "stuffing" and seemingly slow progression of the chapters none of the book would have made sense. Thank you for your out of the box approach and creating a brilliant story with amazing characters and depth not reached in many books I have read.

Adaugo Gina

wow I really enjoyed his book😘😘😍😍😘,Thanks Laurie great story lines you have here kudos

waiting for updates....love the story

Iani328

this was a great book. I loved reading it. would there be a sequel? it would be nice to read one with Eden finding his mate.

Stana Stefano

i really enjoyed this book!! will there be a sequel?? i finished it in 2 days!!!

Jennifer L. Giambrone

whew!! ( releases breath being held) omg! love it!

Michelle Squires

while I love the story and drama these updates are to short and makes you lose the essence of the story with the long wait.

Kay Mc Laurin

I love Adolph!

Ermer Kalinggalan

nice story 😊

Wendy Virginia

can’t say how much I love this story! just gets better and better!

love this story! bye bye Gavin the narcissist!

Courtney Michele

this story is wonderful and very well written. I’m hooked

Iani328

i love this update! I love this book!!!

Lorrie Bartlett-Cook

this girl is doing my head in

Keely Moor

How often are the updates please?

Jessica Bean

she is wasting away her second chance at life like the moon godess gave her and blaming everyone else for their actions when she refuses to actually talk

Sunrise

i absolutely love this story. what a pleasant progression.

i love this story

elle

the girl in this story is very stupid,,,when she is describe strong ang wise but i dont see it,,,she can be easily fooled thats all maybe the author got the wring meaning of strong and wise

angela aldous

needed further development to hook me into this one, seems ok but I’ll pass

Jennifer L. Giambrone

are we going to get back to the story going on at the castle? Laura getting murdered, Delia, Basil...and all that??? !! I'm excited to see what happens after they get back from this mess with Eden.

Marcilla Pace

when will this be continued please

Jennifer L. Giambrone

finally! thank the Goddess, Delia is getting what she deserves!

Jennifer L. Giambrone

need an update please please please 🥺

Catherine O'Neill

Well I think il pass on this one every one is disappointed with the main character

Blessing Chukwuma

wow

when are updates please?

Pamela Pfaff

I feel so very sorry for the Heroine of this story-I really hope that all those who abused and humiliated her get what the royally deserve-I hope from where this story seems to be going that she is going to end up with the head king-the father of the mate who deserted, abandoned,and then most likely had her killed-😸🌷🐬🇳🇱🇲🇨

Patricia Hodge

hope that does it for whoever is reading these comments.

dolly pit

idk why but want Laurel to be with Eden

Michelle Squires

laurel acts so much as a young child throwing taundrum, she has lived as a mature woman and need to stop asking like a naive girl. she seems to have not learned anything from all those years of living in the kingdom, she still looks at herself as nobody in her thinking she needs to get her act together, let's.see some back bone.

damla incesu

chapter 76 missing

I think that chapter 76 is missing

Jennifer L. Giambrone

if no one has told you already, the cover change is great!

Lacie

really love this story…

Renae

does the author @laurie respond to comments?

does anyone know what the update schedule is??

Georgia

how many chapters will be in this?

DeAnna Phillips

I hope she knocks her teeth out. There is no way she should get away with what she has done. She is stupid if she does not tell the king but of course she will cover it up like everyone in her place they're usually do.

Thank you for your amazing storytelling. Your updates are much anticipated, and I am truly enjoying this book 😊❤️

elle

so im just starting to read this book for those who read this quite far may i ask if its good? or the female lead is weak or act stupid or let someone abuse her?

nicg20

I get why Laura/laurel is acting the way she is towards the king but sometimes she takes it to far and is super annoying

NurseAimz18

Why is she always taking abuse from Delia? If she is the King’s mate she needs to check her and stop letting her talk and hit her.

Lynn Hojnacki Lajoie

do you maintain an update schedule for this story?

Bonib2

I think Laurel is a bit too proud not letting Adolph help her and putting Eden's life in jeopardy by letting him shield her and Sarah. And what of Sam and Sarah?

Lacie

when do you update it?

waited a week to read. or was worth the wait. cant wait to see what Basil desides. & how it goes with Laurel & zadolph

Natalia Garza Flores

and another thing I think people should we eat your story more and comment because you have some great material

Cherie Carlisle

its not right what he did

Kristina Mitchell

Hi! I'm so excited to read this book, you had me hooked with the preview!! I was wondering if it is part of a series and if so is this book 1? I LOVE series books but don't want to start in the middle lol.

Wonderful characters, twist and turns, intrigue, and the start of a slow burn romance! Binged the available chapters, can't wait for updates!

Natalia Garza Flores

I love this book when do you update it?

elle

what an annoying character laurel have,,,

Lacie

can’t wait to read more!