Fates Hands Commentaires

Kelli Noble

thought it was just a short story- but I like it

Tracy Cooper

enjoying it very much

April Osborn

so good

Karabear

I am so beyond happy that lily is finally getting some happiness in her life. I understand she was a horrible person before but it was done out of necessity and survival and that deep down, she wasnt really the horrible person she portrayed.

Tasha Atkinson

I knew it...thus keeps getting better

lori Thomas

can't stop reading

Claire tb

chapter 15 book 3 intro: i think the word should be...you read not listen to comments...

Stacey Musterman

ok so if they’re mates why did it take so long I mean it’s been months and now she’s in heat all the sudden there mates

Kary Atkinson

loved this chapter you are pulling you all into your first book You may not figure out your style with this one but the more you write it will come to you but I think you’re doing an excellent job

Michelle Mckinney

is that the end or are there more chapters 🤔

Karen Evers Byrd

I have enjoyed this book...I love all the wires very intriguing...can't wait to see whats next

Reader-240794

I love it😍😍😍

Sarah Hammack

loving this book

Karol Brown

this is a great intense story line!!

Pamela Boyd

This book is so good on chapter 60 just wait it's so good

Marshalee Hinds

enjoying it

Reader-622281

interesting so far

Tina Storer

brilliant story...

Teresa Millar

just when it started to get good ...new to this can't you read the whole book

Shannon Mssassy Patten

sooooooo good

Kim John Ward

really enjoying this book

leatherkey

Oh. My. Lanta!! Love this book so far. So suspenseful, even if very heartbreaking yet heartwarming at the same time. How do you manage that?!

Eriks Rose

I hate the narrative shift in chapter one, from first orsini Spare to third to first person Duncan back to third in only a few paragraphs. Other than that it starts off well

Reader-299086

talk about the evil mother and father, plus twin sister. Love how you aren’t sure of what’s next to happen here.

Tayler Laraway

this is truely an addictive story I’m hooked!

Roxanne Vugts

I absolutely loved this book, i finished it in just over a day/ night lol your an amazing talented writer and u can't wait to read more from you!!! thank you

Susan W

I have been reading novels and short stories for most of my 58 years. Your intro to Adira's store grabbed my attention. your writing kept me enthralled. Character development, storyline development is wonderful. Normally I do not like to read incomplete books because some authors get overwhelmed with life, because it happens. the story is never completed. I am thankful to have hung in while you wrote. Stories are great. I am a fan.

RoseAnn Shepherd

I love the story line!

linda romanowski

you have my attention

Arelene Bryant

So far I love this book but wished all chapters were unlocked.

Reader-553144

you are a very good writer enjoying your books

Jamie Johnson

What happened to the 3 boys Jack took in after the mess in the first book?

Richard Griffin

so far really good 👍

Lula Faye Reed

I thought it was the king . But it was a big foot omg this is on now. ❤ loving it.

Amanda Marsiglia

so far I'm digging the story. I just wish I could keep reading and not have to unlock chapters. This is new to me

Wolfgang Armedaus

Wednesday morning 🌄

love your stories, it is awesome 👌

Lisa Hyden

how do you unlock chapters?

Loverta Summers

this book is great loving it

Tiffany Weaver Ross

I love this so far I can’t wait to finish it

Amber Anderson

I loved it and it wasn't long like most of these stories are. also can you do a book on Asher I would really like for him to find his mate as well. no one deserves to not find a mate.

Daniel Jimenez

is there an option to buy all three books?

Lori Ameling

Ok everyone I have been working on something all I ask I for your patience. I have decided instead of the epilogue I have changed it to little stories, for all the secondary characters. Yes the will the rest of the end of book three. I am. almost done. I thought about sending it as I write but I makes better sense if read all together.

hey Lori I just want to tell you that these books are seriously amazing. I couldn’t put Adira’s and Duncan’s book down! you have a serious talent for writing. please continue doing it! 🥰

Daniel Jimenez

no updates today 😔

Lisa Ramsey

it won't let me continue after tutorial on how to scroll

Christina Holden

Book 1 thoughts : I loved it!!! Loved the relationship between Duncan and Spare. Loved all the relationships except 1. I couldn’t handle the L and K(A) relationship. It seemed kinda forced or like a spur of the moment match considering they had seen and met several times before and their was no connection. I get L was forgiven by the Goddess, but I don’t understand her being paired with K. That was just too much cuz honestly I never came to care for her character. I felt bad after all was revealed but even she said she did a lot because she wanted to. One second she is saying she was trying to protect Spare then in another she says she did it cuz she wanted too. Stockholm Syndrome at its worst. And I get she was groomed from a young age. I just couldn’t find it in myself to believe her because her thoughts were so varied at different times. I also understand that if she was the MFC I prolly would of come to care for her but I was invested in Spare so I was angry for all she did to her

I truly love all three books! This should be in print for sure! You are a gifted writer, Lori! Keep writing!

Amy Bongle Todd

love first few chapters

Stephanie Presley

😀

Doris Rooley

very interested in this so far

Lena Benson

You are an amazing writer, more grease to your elbows

Robyn Russell

hope Micheal ready for war, because it's on the way

KitaScott

I'm loving this story... I can't wait until the beast comes and talk. Hopefully, they won't kill him first.

Linda Arps

this is a good read

Cassandras_Curse

A single warning at the beginning of a book is all that is needed. Warnings at the beginning of every chapter are redundant. if someone chooses to read the book after the first warning, then it is on them if they are later triggered.

Elizabeth Nolan

Love this story

Reader-532788

like the book so far

Sally Sutherland

Love the story! I haven't seen an update for c couple of days and I had seen a post saying that there is a little more to tell. Just checking in to see if I missed the update or something? Thanks in advance.

Lorinda Cartwright

I am loving this series! this was my first shifter books and you had me drawn I n from the start and now I want to to know what happens! and if Marco and sam eventually get their own books

Valentyna Funaro

hope it will get better

Valentyna Funaro

so sad

Valentyna Funaro

great book

emk 8099

Is Fates Hands the first or third book?

CarlandStep Coleman

please never give up writing you are extremely talented I can't wait for more from you

Karan Colvin

Just read book 1 now started book 2. Loving these books, so well written and totally addictive.

Lynell Arps

good read

Cathrine Rehn

I want to know what happens to the children Archer adopted?

Karen Panapa- Simon

thank you,I enjoyed this series and your writing,what I enjoyed most was that I didn't have any or next to any interruptions to my reading.

Emily Wiles

such a wonderful read. loved it!

Daniel Jimenez

I don't see an update yet. was there not one yesterday evening?

Roxanne Rodriguez

love this book

Renee Carroll

I love this book so far

Brooke Mardino

love the story so far

Lorinda Cartwright

when is the next update? i need to know what happens? I’m hooked

Corina Hodge

I'm hooked! love it so far

Christine Kurtz

so are all the guards dead then

Gloria Davies

am loving this story, but it doesnt open where i left off. i go through where i lthink lfeft off and find i have ateady read that part.

Dedra Agnimel

I wonder if Joran is the beast that Selena has doing her killing for stopping her from getting Dargon with her love potion.

Elizabeth Morey

very interested in this wish you could unlock chapters sooner

Natalie Ennis

when is the next update

Raquel Ortega

very interesting!!!

Juanice Terry

I'm so loving ❤ this story 😍

Kira Bamps

nice :)

Eva Roberts

When will the book Just a Girl Alone be coming out? I can’t wait to see what happens with Jack.

Zacheria Morrow

if these were paper I'd buy in a heartbeat I'm hooked

Hannah Holmes

loving the book but there are quite a few grammatical errors

Karabear

why does everyone hate adira so much? it makes no sense.

Merriah Stark

I love love this story I can't get enough

updates please

Jerryle Alexies Aquino

its good

Dezi Kohler

I really enjoyed this story.

Olivia Amanonce Lumanta

Nice story

Renee Carroll

love the book 📖 wish there was a better way to urn more points

Vicki Trewella

Arrgghhh! another Cliffhanger!😤 Well done 👏👏 totally hooked!🥰

Melissa Thorne Halferty

Love this so far. Well written compared to others I have read. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Nichole Simpson

love it so far…. When is the other chapters going to be unlocked?

Reader-249566

had to have not of

Amber Belle

This is a great story.

Lorinda Cartwright

omg! I love this book! I thought the beast was either Dargon or his second! I cannot wait for the next chapters