Luna Lola-The Moon Wolf Comments
Lally Cruz
The story line was good but to give an honest review .. it was written poorly. Besides the name mixed ups and some pronouns mistake .. the personalities of the characters was obviously render in the immature level. Their level of thinking were very limited beyond what it should be. Sad to say, the author wasn't not able to describe her characters explicitly and are lacking.. There are more than 5 chapters repeated which shows that the editing was poorly done too if it's been edited.
08/09/2025 16:17
Visitor
I really enjoy this book but it does need editing
08/09/2025 15:15Visitor
Immature to be a leader, awful
07/27/2025 13:16Visitor
I love the story
07/27/2025 04:12Lulu Belle
OK so I enjoyed the story. the story wasn't my issue. I can't handle "I want to jump his bone" like 5 times if not more. the childish giggling like they are children. the I'm embarrassed cheeks red blah blah blah and the dang crying I can't even explain to you how terrible it was to watch her threaten people with death and then cry so many times in this book I literally wanted to slap her myself. I did finish the story but I swear my eyes hurt from rolling them so much. def needs editing.
07/26/2025 00:43Visitor
I kike it
07/25/2025 08:08Visitor
it's good and could be edited to make more sense. feel like the two main characters need more, I don't know maybe dialog... he is an alpha if he was so worried about her why not talk to her or even others to get an idea about how she was dealing... just a thought
07/22/2025 01:11Visitor
How old is the author, this book is really good but the author and the writing style isn't that great. Hopefully, she or he takes this well
07/19/2025 13:16Visitor
this book is realy a great book I can't put it down really enjoying it
07/14/2025 19:56
user2507142459
this book is great. i love it
07/14/2025 04:59Visitor
this is such an interesting book. i really want to continue reading it!
07/13/2025 23:13Visitor
he hurts her bad and she let's him off too easy. I would have liked him to suffer more as he deserved before she accepted him. she accepted him too easily. one moment she didn't want him and the next she did. he didn't do anything to earn it either.
07/12/2025 06:55Visitor
Great story!
07/07/2025 00:05Visitor
love this story so far!
07/06/2025 06:47Visitor
amazing
06/28/2025 20:40Visitor
I love the story so far
06/25/2025 22:03Visitor
i like it, great story
06/22/2025 05:04Visitor
great story so far,
06/07/2025 11:01Visitor
very interesting book,
06/07/2025 00:44Visitor
I did read this book and it is very interesting, I doesn't drag and it doesn't have alot of pages, I really liked it
06/04/2025 19:44Lobbeke
Even though there are some mix-ups with names, the storyline is very nice! loved reading this!
06/04/2025 18:47Visitor
This is awful, and basically unreadable. I tried. I really did. But the author doesn't even know their own character names; the male lead is a man child who is somehow deemed worthy to be the best person to be the next king of the alphas; NOBODY actually communicates, which is a terrible way to lead; and now manboy is taking credit for Lola's personal growth? ("I forced her to grow.") Wow. I guess emotionally abusing your mate is a good thing, huh? Maybe he'll become King of the Alphas and kill off the whole race. He's certainly killed it for me. Seriously, don't waste your time. One other thing: I reread this comment before I posted it, found a typo, and FIXED it. The author should be strongly encouraged to do the same.
05/28/2025 17:25Visitor
I liked the story but can't read anymore, the mix up of names is to annoying, And that to the fact that the story changed between the characters at the beginning.
04/14/2025 02:54Visitor
Too immaturely written, reads like a child has written this..... can do so much better cause it's a good story
04/01/2025 09:59Sharron Dinsmore
please please please settle on names!!!
02/06/2025 21:52Visitor
I hate this fls who doesn't speak the whole truth
12/02/2024 01:19Tammay H
Ok so it got a lil intense!! lol had to take a breather !!! Now let's see what those bums want and what they get and how it's handled!!! (Lol I am rambling)
10/20/2024 01:53
