The Alpha King's Fated Mate Comments
Uinise
the lead girl is acting like a child but tells the guy to don't treat her as a child. She's overly emotional, and the story has changed so it makes a bit difficult to stay on track and understand how everything flows. Four is idk but this is Ok
11/12/2024 10:16Carmen Lilienthal Smogar
so many errors such as graze instead of gaze, aloud instead of allowed, really need a proofreader
11/12/2024 04:32
Visitor
why did the story change? I'm so lost.
05/05/2024 13:09
