The Wolf and the Fae Comments
Visitor
this was probably the most painful story I've ever read. Seriously need to edit better. At times it seemed 2 ppl were writing this story. Neither of them knew what the other wrote. The ending is the worst.
07/14/2025 23:59Visitor
so far I love this story. keep on writing, and I will keep on reading them.
07/03/2025 21:39Lulu Belle
I made it to 233 I will not be finishing the story. it because to frustrating with all of the mistakes and the 7 times of being kidnapped and the MC is a weakling and the story became boring. it is to bad because it has such potential. I think it needs to be more than one book so characters aren't forgotten about or left behind only to come back in chapter 300 or something. I was rolling my eyes while desperately trying to finish the story. sadly DNF
06/21/2025 22:28Visitor
haven't figured out the storyline yet, hopefully it all comes together soon.
06/17/2025 21:39gina McgarryAnnabellRubiGiovanni
This whole story needs to be cleaned up a bit. One it's moving really fast from one thing to another. The writing does not translate correctly in some places and there is no character development.Just names and salty attitudes... Its gross and Rude.
06/16/2025 17:17Lilly Chator
good read, good characters, I am really enjoying this read so far
06/16/2025 12:27Visitor
Sam get on my nerves and I do not like her! And then to find out that she Enchanted Kaden to leave Lucia makes me hate her even more. She do not deserve Andrew or anyone else
06/10/2025 11:58Visitor
this was a good read so far
05/28/2025 21:44Visitor
Sam Sam Sam ungrateful as always I hate her
05/15/2025 22:54Visitor
I’m sorry this Samantha girl is really annoying and a bit confusing. I really don’t like this character. 😬
05/15/2025 21:46Visitor
I'm kinda sad. the exert i read made it seem like Eric was gonna be Lucia mate and I'm not okay 😭
04/20/2025 13:49Visitor
Who is the mysterious voice that keeps coming to her????
04/04/2025 02:27Patricia Carter Lee
I cant stand Sam. she deserves what she gets for being a terrible friend.
02/05/2025 22:21Erika potter
You went from the king sobbing to her leaving bc of hurtful words. But didn't talk about what actually happened to make her leave. You have to share those details.
01/12/2025 20:06E T
Honestly I don't think the author listen to our thoughts on the writing. They don't give time lines on how long time has pass. POV are different. Also Lucia character is really annoying Honestly. It a good boom but it is so hard to get through with these issues. Especially trying to listen to the audio
12/12/2024 15:54
Danielle Geeslin
I'm really enjoying the concept of this story. I would recommend writing the story out and editing BEFORE you post it. There are places where it seems 2 different stories are being brought together. Names of characters are being confused and changed throughout. You seem like a young/new author who has amazing writing capabilities. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WORK ON EDITING AND STORY FLOW.
11/27/2024 17:08Visitor
I love the story but I feel this book needs some proper editing. it seems as if the author is an amateur and needs proper guidance as to how to arrange his/her thoughts on the plot in a more cohesive effort .. it's a good attempt tho....keep working on it
11/27/2024 16:43
Sarah
Amazing Story!!!I am sooo enjoy the reading!!!!!Dear Dorita, If you are still writing, please let me know where I can follow your the news of yourbooks!!!😍😍😍
11/15/2024 06:42Mary Schluter
nice idea and story. if there was a more cohesive and straight forward timeline it might flow better? its hard to tell if its been hours or years when the scene changes and also whose talking with so many pronouns thrown around since the sames can be neutral. one more note would be to describe better if something really was a dream or not or was just a kiss bc a wild night of passion doesnt equal a kiss but seems to mean thay here? dont stop 💻🖨🖥writing its very very intresting. the main thing to work on is keeping a consistent telling of the time line please. all the best 👩💻
10/22/2024 02:57Tami Thomas-Dykhuizen
am I the only one missing the last part of Chapter 13?
10/14/2024 14:11Ben Osezua
shout out to dorita for an amazing story 😘
05/18/2024 18:39Visitor
❣️🔥 beautiful book Dorits
03/09/2024 17:29
