Lost and Rejected Lycan Princess Comments
Visitor
The concept behind the story is good, but the story itself is in desperate need of an editor. All of the mistakes and jumping around, make it very exhausting to read. I'm afraid I've reached my limit and will not be able to finish it.
03/18/2025 22:47Visitor
i made it to chapter 57 before i just couldnt go any further. i love the idea of the book but it is all over the place skipping around so much and thoughts never get finished. i hope this is the frist draft and that the author will reread and fix the book so it flows better.
10/31/2024 23:01Visitor
what is wrong with this voice ughhh
04/26/2024 16:55Visitor
it this book completed?
04/22/2024 08:22Amanda Franjic
wow, so all negative comments just get deleted right away? or is it with all commenta in general?
03/19/2024 11:33
