Desire to Control Her Comments
Aphrodite
Honestly, you need to work on your English and your writing skills. Your grammatical errors and broken English ruined the whole story. It was a good story as a begginer for a new author. You need to do a little more research and work on your vocabulary. Apart from that, it's all good. But you need to work hard to make your stories better. Keep up the good work!👍🏻
07/21/2024 06:33Rebecca McGrath
as someone who lives this lifestyle I must say your portraying the lifestyle wrong and its a bit offensive. in a bdsm club no one would slap another person sub. and no real Dom would inflict punishment in anger to cause harm. A dom would never give a submissive punishment with the intention of hurting her so bad that she would need her safe word.
06/14/2024 10:26