SHE IS NOT MY MATE Comments

Mine_1920

t5y8 due to all the errors it is quite hard to read, but with a little bit of editing, it could be a great book

Keisha

t5y8 this is a Gud start to the story the writing could do with more vocabulary checks.

Vicki usher

t5y8# well it's a very short straight to the point introduction but it still had me wondering what was going to happen.

Maria Voigt

t5y8 I am sorry to say that this is very badly written, which makes it difficult to follow the storyline.

Oni Blah

t5y8 i like where it’s going but it’s extremely slow getting there. plus the errors make me want to edit it myself. it’s a good concept tho! just needs a little work love :)

t5y8 wow the abuse.... its just to much why do so many books have abuse normalised I don't want to read this

yukischur

I like it but got confused where jumped to Alexa? not Elena anymore?

kimberley

t5y8 it seems like a really interesting book, I am just struggling to read it with all of the errors

T Malloy

t5y8 got me thinking what's next will be adding this one to the list for sure

Chantel Jauch

t5y8 I tried this book, I might give it another go, after seeing others opinions. but my first time around I couldn't get past the first 5 chapters. we'll see what happens...

Bianca Bratu

t5y8 A wonderful story with an interesting plot that makes you want to find out more of the story as soon as possible

Me Myself

t5y8 the introduction of this book has me a bit confused. I will read a couple of more chapters to give it a chance.

t5y8 I've read a couple chapters was not able to get in to it but I will keep going to see how it goes

Selli Dang

t5y8 I was not so sure about the blurb if the book but I gave it a go anyway and I was hooked from the first few chapters. don't let the blurb fool you

Gemma Butler

t5y8 I am not too sure about this book as the introduction has me slightly confused.

John Robinson

t5y8 I have a feeling English isn't the authors first language and yes it does need some work but it certainly isn't unreadable. Credit to author for giving it a go maybe put in the description that English isn't first language, if that is the case maybe then people would be a bit more understanding.

Ashley

t5y8 It seems like it's a little different from other stories I've read. I will have to add it to my library.

Stephanie Merritt

t5y8 just finished the first chapter really looking forward to seeing where this goes so far its very interesting different from others not like all the other stories I've read

coleabm3

t5y8

Bizzybee🐝🌸

t5y8 I think I’m going to enjoy this book ver very much I hate when stories take too long to get to the point but this one is definitely the opposite

Reader-350476

t5y8 Interesting to begin with and I’m kind a like it so I will read the chapters and try to add it on my list.

Megan Phillips

t5y8 I unfortunately couldn't get into this book, I do hope this author gets an editor that can help them with all the errors.

Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

t5y8 This story needs serious editing. The English used is horrible. I am unable to continue reading.

Lexxxxx

t5y8 this book seems like I could be interesting but all of the grammatical errors are really throwing me off.

Reader-731248

t5y8 the introduction has me hooked. it calls for a strong female voice and a very interesting storyline

Emma Wickenden

T5Y8 So far it is an interesting read. It has already got me hooked, good writing and an interesting story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Roxy Galindo

t5y8 Definitely needs editing, but the story is there. I tried a few chapters but I don’t think this one is for me

Julie Mejia Zertuche

t5y8 just started this story and it's pretty interesting, I'm excited to see where she ends up

Jasmine Hurley

t5y8 Plot sounds interesting but after reading the first chapter I’m a little confused. The first chapter seemed to jump into a story line and it’s missing some key background info that will hopefully come to light in the next chapters.

Caitlin Sullivan

t5y8..... interesting start to the book. I hope she really comes into her own and he becomes a good mate

Ranata Lashier

God this is what need a on a lonely night. Per self Pleasure. I love this book it’s getting me so their. I can’t wait

Chen Zhang

So so so so hot hot hot hot story story story story story story very hot

Chen Zhang

i love sex very much i can't control my self when it comes to sex i really like to have sex every day enjoy it very much

Jasmine Hazelbaker

this book changes to a different book with no correlation to first book, no response or clarification from author. Do not waste time!!!

Ranata Lashier

I love everything about this book it leaves you wanting more[Smile]

Laura Kwasniewski-Knoff

So her best friend so busy getting her groove on, she doesn’t realize her friend went missing?

Chen Zhang

hmmm quiet an interesting story let's see how it plays out for her

Zoey Martinez

Don't disrespect the Alpha young girl you looking for problems 😤

Ranata Lashier

L'intrigue est inhabituelle, mais son développement plutôt plate à mon goût.

Chen Zhang

Fantasizing about a person can be crazy I mean you wished you could have them ravish you but sometimes these dreams or fantasies never come true🥺😩

Eduina Ahmetaj

update please….

This book is getting more intriguing. I wonder why he did not try to court or befriend her.

Zoey Martinez

This story is so hot💯 but then why did her best friend didn't look for her

Jennifer May

not the same story for this and next chapters

I just don't understand why she did not call a cab after all the strange things going on around her

Jessica Ima

hmmmm