A Mafia's Obsession Comments
Elin Kähäri
please, she Cant be this stupid, she solde herself and now she is kissing some one and putting his life and her sisters in danger, now she is starting to piss me off
09/05/2023 04:55Elin Kähäri
i dont know what she was thinking,but i dont think she Will do this agen!
09/05/2023 04:44Vicki usher
f6g7# can't say no to a good mafia book. This looks good, different and interesting storyline. Can't wait to find out if she accepts him and if he can make things up to her
09/05/2023 01:24John Robinson
f6g7 As English is not the author's first language I think it is a really good attempt and will be adding to my library to read more. I like Crystal and I think Golden is like the mother hen looking after Crystal. Liking the story so far.
09/05/2023 00:43Caitlin Sullivan
f6g7.... this story appears to have real potential. I hope their characters develop and that he treats her right
09/05/2023 00:25
blubelle Reads
f6g7 great storyline
09/05/2023 00:23
sabrina nace
I liked the story but the English was an issue in some spots. If you have a friend who speaks English you may want to have them review your story before it is posted
09/05/2023 00:16Cansu Harris
f6g7 this story about mafia is very different she is stuck with a loan that her father has with the mafia.
09/05/2023 00:12
Joele G
f6g7 the storyline got me hooked; off to a great start so far; like to see where it takes you
09/05/2023 00:11Aaira
f6g7 the story looks interesting I have read a few chapters I think I will be continuing to read more and know more about the story
09/04/2023 23:57J Marie
Not to discount the author's efforts, but it's obvious that the author is not very familiar with English. The vocabulary is very limited with many words used incorrectly. No development happening with the characters.
09/04/2023 23:53
Reader-778832
f6g7. so she hates the mafia but then gets a job with them? Really?plot is too ridiculous to even bother
09/04/2023 23:22Lostluna
Very very interesting read I totally recommended it!
09/04/2023 17:18Lostluna
well done author!!
09/04/2023 16:26
