The Alpha's Unwanted Mate Comments
Reader-072722
any updates? looks like almost 2 months!
11/01/2023 21:48
Rosswife
can she reject him yet
09/05/2023 07:33Bridget Geraghty
chapters are so short
09/05/2023 06:49Katie Denly
#bringeread
09/05/2023 05:50#winbonus
09/05/2023 05:34Marie
Am I the only one who doesn’t know what knotting means?!
09/05/2023 02:34Salma Ajaib
6j7k - I usually only like reading books once they are complete as I hate waiting for new chapters, but the first few chapters have me hooked so this has definitely been added to my library!
09/05/2023 00:35Emily
6j7k rejection is absolutely crushing but to see your mate pinning for your twin sister has a harder sting to it
09/05/2023 00:17zira
6j7k ithurt to feel not needed and feeling less by someone means too much but what's important is how to be strong at the end...
09/05/2023 00:136j7k the beginning looks interesting. I really hope the story turns around and she gets what she wants.
09/05/2023 00:05Irma Beck
6j7k life terms to be unfair to some but to be blatantly mean is not nice. hope this book gets better
09/05/2023 00:05John Robinson
6j7k Already sympathise with Celeste, sign of a well written character, hopefully she will get her happily ever after.
09/05/2023 00:03Awurabena Afriyie Asare
#6j7k# to be rejected is hurtful but to be rejected and not wanted by your mate is really more stinging and bashful than expected especially in this story where one is liked over by no other than a sister.
09/05/2023 00:02Vicki usher
6j7k# I found this book and because for the reviews had a look, was worth it. Nice to see the weak becoming strong.
09/05/2023 00:02Louise Sranan
6j7k This story is a beautiful one I had read awhile ago. I will recommend for other readers as well
09/04/2023 23:39Marvin Vanderkust
6j7k love this story very much. as a reader I did enjoy the work of this author. lol 😄
09/04/2023 23:39
Kitty-694016
6j7k. I haven’t gotten very far but I hope Celeste gets what she should have. I always felt overshadowed by my younger sister. Having your mate want someone else is heartbreaking
09/04/2023 23:25Jachdiel Van der kust
6j7k sad to see when people are strongeling to get attention from a lover. and the lover is blind to see that too
09/04/2023 23:22Sammie Panda
#6j7k# I loved this entire book! I loved the many storyline within it and how it twists along the way. Celeste was such a great female lead character in this- I love her!
09/04/2023 23:03Ashley Lucabaugh
6j7k When I first started reading the snippet I wasn't too interested until the last line. That grabbed my attention and I've added it to my library.
09/04/2023 22:57Julie Schmitt
6j7k The first two chapters sucked me in. Damn how is it twin sisters are not close, I sure hope the nasty one gets what she deserves.
09/04/2023 22:26Mary Pownell-Styer
I guess I won’t continue reading because it looks like the book hasn’t updated in a while.
09/04/2023 19:53
Jennifer Stevens
when will the book be updated? love the story!
09/04/2023 19:32
Bonib2
The storyline is good but the inane commentary every single darn chapters is putting me off from liking it.
09/04/2023 19:21Christine Grijalva
I am glad she said what she said. I hope she stays strong. I think she should not do the dishes she didn’t do the mess.
09/04/2023 19:14thank you for continuing with the story.
09/04/2023 19:12Lacy-ladybug Thomas
love your story I have it on 2 different apps. I know times are crazy around the holidays but I really do hope you finish the story.
09/04/2023 19:04Debra Heston
That expression is reversed and does not make sense as written. It should be more like : She doesn't act like even a distant relative, much less as a sister. Perhaps you could try a variation on words that seem so over familiar that they grow tired and worn. How about this: Family is supposed to look out for each other, but she had only looked out for herself. Bad enough that she ignored the well being of others she ought to be protective of, she had shown herself willing to hurt her own sister if she stood to gain from it... even something trivial and petty. This describes the character more explicitly. It is also foreshadowing of something that may be explained later in the story. It becomes a hook to draw the reader in a little wondering what happened. When will it be revealed and how may it tie into future events? 🤔 Needs work. I may try another page or two before I give up, but it doesn't seem promising.
09/04/2023 18:54Sini Cnair
good story
09/04/2023 18:53Mary Hall
can I just kill Celeste for being stupid
09/04/2023 18:52Amanda Moorefield
it's December, and as a writer myself I would say that even if the comments are dragging, use them to better yourself, I just finished the last chapter you wrote and ever since you took out the notes from yourself the flow has been pleasant and consistent, please continue this story. I'd like to see how it ends.
09/04/2023 18:49wolfygirl19
when r new chapters being posting
09/04/2023 18:44
Yolanda D. Glasgow
Your characterization of this character is pathetic. I just can’t keep reading it! 😞
09/04/2023 18:38Reader-967725
is the story going to get better? is she going to be such a loser forever?
09/04/2023 18:37Mary Hall
I love this book and can't wait to finish this reading journey 💯💯💯❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 18:34Andrea Smith
I wish there was a way for her to reject him and break the mate bond, then he will find out that her sister is only good for one thing.
09/04/2023 18:30Reader-967725
celeste is stupid
09/04/2023 18:14not Xavier but Liam is with them
09/04/2023 18:14
Tony zhang
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09/04/2023 18:13Tony zhang
good
09/04/2023 18:03Tony zhang
good
09/04/2023 18:01Shannon Brown
Why is the daughter of a Beta an Omega help me to make it make sense?
09/04/2023 17:51Rita M Reynolds
I like the book but what don’t like is when you use a chapter saying the same thing again!
09/04/2023 17:39Reader-589828
I thought she was the little girl. Now she just needs to tell him that too. Celine you better brace yourself.
09/04/2023 17:34Debra Heston
"get rid of my repetition " Do you know what repetition IS? How about 'repeat' ? gah.
09/04/2023 17:30Lee-Ann Cameron
loving this book where can we get the rest of your chapters?????
09/04/2023 17:27Mary Hall
I can't with her and Xavier Sheila Xavier and her sister Celia play her I can't do this this book sucks now
09/04/2023 17:21hmm this book isn’t complete? well hell
09/04/2023 17:13I am so sad for Celeste. I want to cry as my heart breaks for her.
09/04/2023 17:05
Lucy
how often are the updates? loving this book
09/04/2023 17:02Catherine Johnson
she needs to reject him.
09/04/2023 16:54Mary Hall
I feel bad for Celeste, she is getting treated so wrong and for what
09/04/2023 16:45shaireen
next update?
09/04/2023 16:44Theresa Calhoun
I like to read this book but you making it hard keep.cutting it short and asking question and repeating same things over and over
09/04/2023 16:02Amanda Moorefield
the author notes seem as if you're just trying to fill I'm the required minimum word limit per chapter. it makes the book appear unprofessional.
09/04/2023 16:00Louise Welsh
This book needs work and chapters are too short. Zillon hasn't even spoken to the twin yet and you have them sleep together. I think you need re-write this book because alot is being repeated and not being mentioned. I do like the story line. It'll be better if you put an effort to it
09/04/2023 15:43BARBARA ANN TWOMEY
hard to know weather it's going to be gd or not rite now I'm more pissed that I'm waiting for updates sorry
09/04/2023 14:54Amanda Jackson
why did it have to stop there come on maybe I should wait until the entire book is done before I try to read it so far it's good
09/04/2023 14:17
