The Virgin's Doctor Comments
Visitor
‘she’s my dad’s Brother, so isn’t that my aunt?’ WHAT?? erm no, your dad’s brother would be your uncle!!! this story is so badly written and I’m only 2 pages in.
07/02/2025 14:54Sirina Mamle Sodji
this story is confusing
09/04/2023 17:43Sirina Mamle Sodji
this story is a disaster
09/04/2023 17:34
Reader-674461
I am so confused! I have no idea what is going on. The write keeps switching genders for the main character and relative, the event don’t flow. I think you need to edit this story so the reader can understand what you are trying to communicate.
09/04/2023 16:55Linda Puckett
this story makes no sence
09/04/2023 16:35TLC75
I feel as though I am reading a story written in Filipino language and put through a really bad English translator! This writer does not understand English language. very difficult story to follow. And very annoying, they do not understand character name Tit is not good in English, in Filipino would be calling your aunt name Suso or Dibdib lololol please have edit for better translation!
09/04/2023 16:34Christy Cleis Rapoza
The first chapter made no sense so I did not bother reading anymore.
09/04/2023 16:34
Mez
Terrible. Don’t read.
09/04/2023 15:44
Cerisia Post
I don't like it. I feel as though the writer failed language arts in school. I didn't understand the story at all. You will need a translator when reading this story.
09/04/2023 14:59
