SUBMIT TO THE ALPHA KING Comments
Nadya Garay-Thompson
I loved the introduction of a female character, who was strong enough to stand for herself, despite of being told that she is nobody. Please complete the story.
09/23/2024 14:02Mical Perez
If the "Lucifer " Alpha is so strong so why he have the smallest pack? no makes sense
05/08/2024 11:28Mical Perez
They need to fix the grammer,no only that,the names of Lucifer and Demoni,is like Demonic,i think that's is no names for a werewolf,i think is ridiculous names
05/08/2024 11:25Mical Perez
Lord Lucifer??? lol why the author have to put that name for a werewolf haha
05/08/2024 11:16Jessica Cobb
you should go back and read your story and edit it. you repeat statements and the grammer needs work.
10/14/2023 04:58Rebecca Fairburn
This book repeats itself many times
09/05/2023 05:16Avd
x1c5 This is a really exciting book! The story is very intriguing and hot! I am really in love with it
09/05/2023 04:15Irma Beck
x1c5 it seems like a good story so far. interested to see how the story unfolds. definitely added to my list of library to read books
09/05/2023 01:33Me Myself
x1c5 it is a well written story so far. I am intrigued and will keep reading it
09/05/2023 00:48ranger023
x1c5 something tells me this girl will be no ordinary omega. I like the scene had a little medevil feel to it
09/05/2023 00:42Marvin Vanderkust
x1c5 I have added this book in my library because I don't like to start reading stories and await eternity before it's finished.
09/05/2023 00:42
Reader-072710
x1c5 well written
09/05/2023 00:39x1c5 based on the intro and comments, it looks like it's worth a read. Adding it to my "to-read" list.
09/05/2023 00:24Bianca Bratu
x1c5 this story makes you love it from the beggining. I am really intrigued to find out how the story plays out.
09/05/2023 00:23Diana
x1c5 so far I like it. It's funny how the alpha can't take his own medicine.
09/05/2023 00:23Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
x1c5 This is a another story that requires serious editing. I get a headache trying to figure out what the author is trying to say.
09/05/2023 00:10Sumriti Singh
x1c5 i like the writers not that this story is not about your typical werewolf so yup i will surely give it a go bcoz i like an edge to the story
09/05/2023 00:04
Megan Phillips
x1c5 this story is rather intriguing. I am hoping they both give each other a chance to see where the relationship could go.
09/05/2023 00:03Jenna Mc Augustine
x1c5 with a cover like that this book should be exciting. she is in need of some friends
09/04/2023 23:50Gemma Butler
x1c5 I enjoy the sound of this book. I’ve added it to my library to read when it’s complete
09/04/2023 23:44Kat Waters
x1c5 been awhile and no updates why do I bother 2 read any more I hope she finds a second chance mate
09/04/2023 23:43Nadia Ogle
x1c5 interesting so far chapters are short. She has guts and courage it seems. Can't wait to read further on how she defies him more.
09/04/2023 23:38x1c5 #x1c5 it's quite entertaining to see Lucifer's rejection got interrupted. very interesting introduction. I like how the author states what the story isn't about.
09/04/2023 23:31
Joele G
x1c5 very interesting from the start; intrigue how the story comes together; will be adding to the library
09/04/2023 23:10Kerry Graham
X1c5 the book sounds Interesting so far and I cannot wait to see how the story evolves
09/04/2023 23:08Merle Langevoord
x1c5 enjoyed reading the first few chapters. really looking forward to how the story will continue
09/04/2023 23:01Reader-731248
x1c5 the introduction doesn’t give much away, but it still peeked my interest…
09/04/2023 23:00Vicki usher
x1c5# so of course I added this book to my library anyone would after reading the introduction, the only reason I haven't started it is because I need to now when it will be finished I have no patience and don't want to forget about the if its taking to long to finish
09/04/2023 22:53Sam Davies
please update
09/04/2023 21:01Mercy Uwaifo
I wonder how they were able to dress her up with ease when her hands were tied up 🤔🤔
09/04/2023 18:41Reader-229738
please update soon I’m soo loving this book 🥰
09/04/2023 18:13Leta Beard
wish it was all unlocked
09/04/2023 17:41Kateřina Šimerdová
i like this story 😊 cant wait for unlock next chapters 😉
09/04/2023 16:24is she really ugly?I'm confused,he called her innocent cute perfect under the ugliness. is there more chapters coming?
09/04/2023 16:16Hanna
I honestly love this book. third time reading it while waiting for updates….
09/04/2023 15:32it’s a fine story and I can get past the editing mistakes but I don’t understand going from ugliest to beautiful back and forth
09/04/2023 15:24Big Bugjo
nice so good please update
09/04/2023 15:14Dee dee
Why is all the chapters locked all of a sudden
09/04/2023 15:00I really really really like this book. So please keep writing on this story.
09/04/2023 14:34Theresa Albany
awesome please update
09/04/2023 14:16is the story updated regularly?
09/04/2023 14:07Aisha Razi
soo good!!! Pls update soon!!!
09/04/2023 13:24
