FIX ME Comments
Essie Morgan
what happened to the daily updates
09/04/2023 14:27Roman Glory Winifred
no more updates?????
09/04/2023 13:58Messa Gow
OMG this writing style is terrible. I can't get past the first few sections. It flows like a highschool creative writing project.
09/04/2023 13:03
Lizzy Jasper
nice story so far. I love it
09/04/2023 13:03victor phronesis
amazing story. I love every bit of it
09/04/2023 12:41kacha
A nice story. but too much of repetition of the same lines over and over again in terms of POV which is OFF. The writer can change that habit of repetition otherwise story is awesome
09/04/2023 12:37
