A Rogue For The Alpha Twins Comments
Maxine Goin-Kelley
I love the framework of the story, but it is very direct and proper, or as one might say very cut and dry. I do not belive English is the native language of the writer because when they are taking about a guy they say she and when they are talking about a girl they say him. Their is no use of I, and refer to the character in third person. There are also other sentences structure and grammatical issues to point to a non English writer.
08/02/2025 15:00
olliesea_bengals
Couldn’t get through it. story needs to be edited
09/21/2023 15:10Torill Kristiansen
Nice story,so far...like it much
09/19/2023 19:49Amaris Gigi Marte
okay so I’ll just say this the story line is good and I like it but the only thing that is annoying is the writing and the editing is really bad and I mean very poorly written
09/05/2023 05:59Ashley Lucabaugh
9p0a From the little bit I've read this sounds like an intruding book. I can't wait to see what happens as the story develops.
09/04/2023 23:52Terrin Garis
#9p0a# Only 3 chapters in and I just can't. I'm usually really relaxed with editing and what not but this books complete lack of it actually makes it super confusing and hard to read.
09/04/2023 23:51Linda Strandquist
#9p0a how the editing gets better. the story is getting interesting. the first alpa is a jerk hope they go after him. love the reference to Sophia the First my kids favorite show growing up
09/04/2023 23:50Ade Nanette
The writing is bad, full of mistakes. This book was never proof read, it is very difficult to read. Too bad because the story could hav been nice.
09/04/2023 23:50
9p0a #9p0a I have been intrigued by this book for awhile now and will keep an open mind while reading it. I guess only time will tell when I read more of this story.
09/04/2023 23:34Reader-972889
poor writing and editing.
09/04/2023 23:33Lara Napier
9p0a this book is starting to get interesting! the first alpha I don’t like, he’s a jerk so I hope they go after him
09/04/2023 23:07zira
9p0a i like the story when one heroin or the hero is a rogue...it only shows that not all rogue are totally bad..
09/04/2023 22:31Rafael
#9p0a# an interesting introduction. I like the supernatural stories. the characters also seems interesting. I added in my library and I am going to reading it soon.
09/04/2023 22:25Megan Marie Monge
Honestly im so caught up in the story I didnt even see the errors٫ you're doing a great job! id like to see any of these people that are complaining write a book and have zero errors✋
09/04/2023 20:24nakisha adams
I love the story but I want to cry for Sophia 🥹
09/04/2023 19:27Ginia Johnson
As disappointing as this ending is, hope your eyesight gets better because that is more important than more details about the birthday and everything else.
09/04/2023 17:59Felicia Byrd
it's shameful the way you ended this story after it just started getting good. and then another one?!?! girl bye
09/04/2023 17:34Michelle Carroll
very disappointing ending. very rushed. spoiled a good read
09/04/2023 17:16Isabelle Pilon
I’m crying for the past 2 chapters. Realy like the story, thank you
09/04/2023 16:58
Designergirl
Ok this book is good but very confusing bcuz Asa is also called Aiden 🤦🏽♀️. Now Lucy is being called gay, so is Lucy a transgender or just a girl being bullied by her former pack 🤔. I just need clarification on these issues.
09/04/2023 16:41
Free
difficult to read w all the grammatical errors
09/04/2023 16:41kata rihari
horrible read needs editing
09/04/2023 16:36
Anita Castle
I looked the book but I found that when it started to get really good and interesting that book just ended.
09/04/2023 16:35Nicole Morgan
I love the story and interesting.
09/04/2023 16:31
Mad reader
I love this book, been a while since I read a book this good
09/04/2023 15:56
John Doe
Dear readers, I want to first of all thank all of you for choosing to read my book. You don’t how much seeing all this reads inspire me to write better. I am a new writer and my book might not be as good or prefect as other writes yet you choose to read it. Thank you for choosing to read my perfectly imperfect book. More better books are on the way…..
09/04/2023 15:31Teresa Patterson
some might be confused with how some of the wording is missing or wrong but seems like a good book
09/04/2023 15:20Olayinka Lawal Adelabu
yea you really need someone to edit your work too much grammatical errors
09/04/2023 15:16Shonda Stanneart
Love this story. Can't wait to finish it.
09/04/2023 15:09Joanne Stinton
loving the story but the errors it's getting harder to decipher please get this proof read more people will read it 🙏
09/04/2023 15:06Sharon Montgomery
Liked this book but the ending was very rushed
09/04/2023 15:04Lola Weiskopf
its a good thought so far, I’m interested n seeing where it goes. just one thing if you are going to write in english learn more before u write the next book. try writing in your native language if you haven’t already
09/04/2023 15:02sharon dockery deane
the poor girl
09/04/2023 14:59Kathy Kinsley
rapped...as in knock on a door. wrapped....to enclose as in "he wrapped his arms around her"
09/04/2023 14:57she already danced with them in the garden when they had dinner there...... also getting annoyed with changes in names - Sophia seems to have been called by a couple of other names since the start
09/04/2023 14:36Sharni Mizzy
I really wanted to read this book as what I have read so far is good but I can not continue with all the errors. when something isn't proof read and has alot of errors I lose interest fast. I do hope this can be fixed.
09/04/2023 14:26Hilda Perez Bolde
When you write a book, it should always be in a language your are fluent in ...
09/04/2023 14:16
Daniele lion
pretty woman 👘👠👠
09/04/2023 14:13Kathy Kinsley
where...as in where are the people sitting? (location) were...as in they were very nice people
09/04/2023 14:12Marjorie Wall
if you need a proofreader I'm volunteering, your story has great potential, to read it with that volume of mistakes is painful and distracting.
09/04/2023 13:57Irena Vodišek Smirčić
The book has potential, but English in it is ... sorry, I just can't read this. You need someone who can correct all your mistakes.
09/04/2023 13:56do the twins have last names?
09/04/2023 13:51that girl KJ
I did the same thing my first day working at a school with prek
09/04/2023 13:45TerriConnar Jensen
having a really hard time reading this with the broken English and all the mistakes
09/04/2023 13:33Amanda Leopold
I like the story but so many grammatical errors, it makes it hard to read.
09/04/2023 13:33Jessica Bean
she still hasn’t even thought about xavier at all again
09/04/2023 12:06i am by chapter 44 now A Rogue for the Alphas twins is there more chapter to open A Rogue for the Alphas twins
09/04/2023 11:58Jessica Bean
xavier always willing to forgive xiao for his errors but xiao never thinks of xavier and its both of their mate but xiao always monopolizes her
09/04/2023 11:47Jessica Bean
i feel extremely bad for xavier. his mate never thinks of him only of xiao
09/04/2023 11:37Edwina Lewis
I cant eait for the update they they r fully mated I cant wait to see her parents see her. loving it
09/04/2023 11:25when is the next update
09/04/2023 10:48
