The frozen alpha Comments
Although this is an interesting story (with minor plot errors), it’s too difficult to follow since the author’s failed to use pronouns correctly. Honestly, if you’re going to write about specific characters, then be specific; otherwise your story is a pointless mess, like this one is. It’s too much mental work to read this to try and figure out for every sentence which character you’re referring to. 🤷🏼♀️I’m out.✌🏻
09/04/2023 22:58Rose Wheeler
it's a lgbtq story! yay!!
09/04/2023 19:47Reader-216447
is this an lgbtq novel?
09/04/2023 19:44
