Unwanted and Unloved by alpha Kane Comments

Marion Absher

This book needs to be edited.

Fka Noyfb

If she's going to be another doormat character then let know before I start reading

Gemma Butler

q1w5 I enjoyed the introduction to this book but I don’t start books that are ongoing. I’ve added it to my library to read when it’s complete

Gemma Rookes

q1w5 I've really enjoyed the start to this book. I love that it gets straight to the point and that summer is a strong woman who sounds that she won't take anything from anyone

John Robinson

q1w5 I love Summer the main female character, beat that's not the last we heard from Olivia it was way too easy, hope Kane doesn't hurt Summer again. Think it's going to be an interesting story.

Sabrina Bray

I'm only on chapter 2 but feel like it should be the end of the book. this book definitely needs more of a back story before the happy reunion

Sandra Saß

Chapter 1: ..he hugged her clothes to him?!? was it meant to read ...he hugged her close to him? because it makes no sense with clothes 🤪

astrea

SHONE is the past tense of shine

Amanda Marie

I could barely get through the beginning. An abundance of grammatical errors. Punctuation is important. I could see an amazing story if it was edited accordingly.

Hanna

oh no the old best friend is going to come back making drama. I love the story …

Joanne Hess

I'll pass on this one. it sounds good but as an English major I've had it with these stories where Grammer and punctuation is non-existent

Marie Peat

I can't read this there are far to many grammatical errors that it ruins the story. I enjoyed what I managed to read

Reader-457952

it’s wolfsbane not wolfsvain. wolfsvain makes me think of a vain wolf

Bata? Seriously, spellchecking is not for the week. Still, good plott.

Teresa Patterson

I like the story so far it's good but it needs to be rewritten because the flow of the story has too many stops and starts and doesn't transition well from one thought to the next. I wrote a story in a notebook and I loved it but I knew I had to rewrite it because of the flow so I started rewriting it and it came out a little better of course I lost that book and one of the hasty moves from house to house but it's a good storyline.

Reader-619706

It’ll be easier to read with punctuation especially when people are talking.