Unbreakable Comments
Annabel Deibler
Will there be a final book to close out the series?
03/29/2025 19:55Anya Hill
I'm sorry but all three books are essentially the same story but this one has longer chapters.
09/04/2024 15:41Anya Hill
I feel like this is a repeat of untouchable but shorter because I read all of untouchable and unhinged and it all seems the same .
09/03/2024 16:19
Visitor
Continuing ask I want to know how it ends. Finding this hard to read with all the errors. Also finding some of rather forced, and not well thought out.
06/30/2024 13:45Merle Langevoord
w6g8 just started reading the first few chapters. I'm really looking forward how the story continue
09/05/2023 00:32Julia
w6g8 i think the recommendations are random at best, why are they recommending a story that won't be updated?
09/05/2023 00:17Me Myself
w6g8 I am liking the book so far, it is well written and I have added it to my library
09/05/2023 00:15Sumriti Singh
w6g8 i will first read first two then i will definitely read this one as it peaked my interest and who am I to say no to a good book
09/05/2023 00:14Selli Dang
w6g8 another recommendation and as I started to read the start and I was instantly hooked on the story. I can't wait to finish work so I can continue with this
09/05/2023 00:09Jeniffer Barnes Hurt
#w6g8# "Unbreakable", I'm adding this one to my library. I'll have to read the other 2 first, but can't wait to get to it.
09/05/2023 00:08
Reader-350476
w6g8 it’s really a good story to read and I’m looking forward to finish this book.
09/05/2023 00:08w6g8 seems like I missed a lot of backstory I will have to read the other books before I try this one, otherwise it won't make any sense.
09/05/2023 00:07Rafael
#w6g8# I like the introduction. it seems a interesting story and it is intriguing. but I think I will read the first book of the series .
09/05/2023 00:01w6g8 #w6g8 the story seems interesting and addictive. good introduction. I will look at the first 2 books first before I start reading.
09/04/2023 23:39
Megan Phillips
w6g8 the introduction to this story looks promising, I might need to look at the other books before I start this one.
09/04/2023 23:26Reader-482443
where can I find her
09/04/2023 15:52
Alyssa
just when I was starting to like Neron. smh
09/04/2023 15:46
Sarah
I’m seriously heartbroken that you won’t finish the books here. I’m sry that they’re disrespecting you too. I have joined patreon.
09/04/2023 13:20
Nina072
thank you for the update, two chaps were more than we were hoping for. these were great, enjoy the rest of break.
09/04/2023 13:08
Sherisa Weston
ohh geez I would be able to use Patreon. I am so disappointed but respect your decision. Maybe in the future you could try another reading site and notify us
09/04/2023 13:06Nysha Obannon
omg no more chapters I can’t handle this
09/04/2023 13:06Reader-670952
when will there be an update?
09/04/2023 12:50Reader-670952
I know you’re busy but when will there be another update ?
09/04/2023 12:48when will there be an update...?
09/04/2023 12:48
Sassy
I love the slow burn between them. I predict it’s going to be freaking awesome when they finally give in. I’m speaking for myself when I say that’ll be the most read chapter in this book
09/04/2023 12:45Reader-670952
I’m on pins and needles when is the next update ?
09/04/2023 12:43Reader-323329
what is maras back story again I read the other book a while ago I remember she bonded with Ariel after Odessa but not much else
09/04/2023 12:40Reader-670952
No pressure because I know you’re busy but when will there be other updates
09/04/2023 12:26
Mrs.Hyde
I'm asking myself the same question why she wouldn't let her heal her.
09/04/2023 12:18Nina072
well that's one way to redeem yourself and I dont think I need to repeat myself on how I feel about Vag- I mean Val. 🙄 urgh neron shoulve clocked him!!!!! I never wanted to go into a book so badly and do it myself.
09/04/2023 12:16
Marii Solaria
Dear Readers, updates are SUSPENDED until further notice.
09/04/2023 12:15
Analiza
Oh my tears were falling.... hope Raina will be okay...
09/04/2023 12:11Analiza
omg. i do they are okay....
09/04/2023 11:56Sherisa Weston
Author was Asir and the Selene's first avatar mates?
09/04/2023 11:53Wow… okay ….. you sure you were having a writer block because girlllllllllllll Im still at the end of my seat 😳😳😳😳😳😳👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
09/04/2023 11:42Analiza
amazing.... hope jomathan will banished for good....
09/04/2023 11:34
Lynora Crawford
I just read 47, and had to fight to not laugh out loud, and wake my husband! This chapter was phenomenal!
09/04/2023 11:16
Sonia McLeod
omg I am dying more please 😁😁🇬🇧
09/04/2023 10:57Marii Solaria
1/29/2022 Hello my readers! Quick update. Due to exams next week for both my Pharmacology and Intergrated Health Care classes (both on the same day 😵), updates will be pushed until next weekend. Writing is the last thing on my mind right now 😅
09/04/2023 10:55Reader-670952
Is chapter 46 the last update ?
09/04/2023 10:29Jael Brown
I am so ready for Jonathan to just die. When will his evil reign of terror end. Why does the curse effect Neron and not Oynx and does the curse effect Neron's visions as well.l?
09/04/2023 10:28waiting patiently for new updates… will it be soon? I sure hope so amazing book
09/04/2023 10:27
Meaghan Prue
so marii did Angelo come back to life too
09/04/2023 10:21Meaghan Prue
Happy new year everyone let's toast to another miserable and painful death for the asshole and the skank and kiya and neron be together forever
09/04/2023 10:20Sonia McLeod
omg I want Jonathan to die for good this time with all the knowledge and power they have why can't they get rid of him I can't believe he took over neron body how cruel is he I hope they find the map and the answers they need😘😘🇬🇧
09/04/2023 10:17Meaghan Prue
I know this is kiya and nerons story but I do miss Jackie she was such a fun character. I am so glad that kiya and neron are making good progress its amazing how they began as enemies in a way more like neron made her an enemy and has grown as a man and sees that his father was the jerk. Keep up the good writing Marii
09/04/2023 10:14Meaghan Prue
omg please want more of this 😍
09/04/2023 10:12Great chapter! I just love me some Onyx 🥰
09/04/2023 10:12Merry Christmas Ms. Marii. Again, thanks for creating such wonderful stories. 💕❤️🎉
09/04/2023 10:07Hope you are doing well Marii. just loved the update. How Neron and Kiya just forgot about Asim in the room 😆. Nuria little tease with her mate 😂
09/04/2023 10:05Jael Brown
Damn Jonathan is just so evil, I feel like Nuria and wish he had stayed dead. I can't believe he slapped her that asshole. His mind is warped if he thinks his family wants anything to with him. I hope the avatars send him back to hell where he belongs.
09/04/2023 10:04Hello Ms. Author, Approximately, how many more chapters does this book would have? 😁 I am not sure if you have mentioned it before.
09/04/2023 10:02Jael Brown
Merry Christmas Marii to you and your family and thank for the update. How did you know I asked Santa for one 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
09/04/2023 10:02Reader-670952
When will there be an update beyond chapter 40
09/04/2023 09:59Asim is a VERY smart man 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
09/04/2023 09:59Another great chapter!
09/04/2023 09:57
Karla Carlos
wait Neron is in a cave... could it be the map that his grandpa gave him the way out of the cave?
09/04/2023 09:57Nina072
Johnathan's second death will be even sweeter than the first time around.
09/04/2023 09:56Nina072
so i let 4 chapters stack up so heres my reaction..... the first two: ohhhhhh girl get it! bust that nut! discover that kink! about time you felt that good good. yeeeeeeeeaaaaaahhhhhhhh I dont think I've ever been so happy to see a character experience that. it's so different when you feel safe with the person you're with. that was sweet. the last two: what in the actual frack marii?! how could you stab me in the heart like this!?! Odessa? now that was a massive twist! now.....wait a minute.....what's going on with phoebs??? am I smelling a lost sibling or a magical ego death? *gasp* hecate is usually symbolized as 3 people......we talking triplets? but someone would have to be the Crone. holy hell!!! I mean I know kiya is alive because then the book would end but holy frack! what a wrench you threw in here. we're back in action yall!
09/04/2023 09:55Meryam Ahsan
I honestly hope that Neron doesn’t leave the pack lands, and they use the witchcraft phoebe has and asims help to figure out how to stop apophis …
09/04/2023 09:54Sonia McLeod
Beautiful how they are getting to know each other and not just jumping into sex I love them both I hope they can find the book and get the answers they need to Defeat his father😘😘🇬🇧
09/04/2023 09:53Analiza
oh sweet selene please help nerion and kiya
09/04/2023 09:50Mrs.Hyde
Damn I love Violetta. Smart thinking.
09/04/2023 09:50must say marii, great update and cliffhanger again! can't wait for the next one 😊
09/04/2023 09:50Jael Brown
Damn Kiya and Neron, for them not to have actually done the deed this was very hot
09/04/2023 09:48Jael Brown
Why does it feel like it's not the end. I mean Jonathan and his lackeys are wounded and injured but I have a funny feeling we will be seeing them again.
09/04/2023 09:48I absolutely love the way this was written, and even more, I love the way Neron loved away her insecurities.
09/04/2023 09:48Lynora Crawford
It took them long enough to get to this point (that is NOT a criticism in ANY way!), but good grief that was incredibly well-written!!! I'm glad Kiya finally realized she was worth it!
09/04/2023 09:48Analiza
i am hoping they remember about the map and they will finish jonathan for good
09/04/2023 09:48Analiza
it is like osiris done to kiya, but LOVE will prevail...
09/04/2023 09:48Sonia McLeod
dam brilliant 😘😘🇬🇧
09/04/2023 09:47
Kecina_Janice
So so good! Can’t wait to see what they do to the fam bam when they have them all together
09/04/2023 09:47Meaghan Prue
I do believe onyx had it wrong not the reincarnation of gnat no more like a pig and a snake and I'm sure the wolf wouldn't mind taking the pigs head and placing it on a pike where it belongs
09/04/2023 09:45Nina072
oh thank god, I was worried about liberty.
09/04/2023 09:45Jael Brown
Best update ever, Oynx had me in here rolling. I was laughing so hard 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
09/04/2023 09:44I'm loving the fun, sexy, light hearted moments in this book. Honestly Unhinged was a little too dark and heavy for me (still awesome) I love seeing Neron and Kiya find their way back to each other. I feel like they have both worked so hard to heal and deserve this moment.
09/04/2023 09:44Meryam Ahsan
there you go people - Phoebe’s evil lookalike is called rhea
09/04/2023 09:44Oh my, I want more. Now we just need to get Kira and Neron on the same page. I just have this feeling that if they mark each other, they will draw more strength from each other. Glad to see their relationship developing.
09/04/2023 09:43Jael Brown
Damn Marii you did it again these cliffhangers, though. Well Odessa is still crazy delusional, Jonathan needs to let it go, and who the hell is evil Phoebe. It seems like Apophis has brought back someone to torment each of our favorite characters, so I wonder who will be resurrected to torment the other avatars that destroyed Osiris. As always great update Marii.
09/04/2023 09:42Humairah Mahomedy Rangila
can someone reshare violetta’s back story with me again. I read the other two books but can’t recalls
09/04/2023 09:42Jael Brown
Loved this soft core porn and I love how they are taking their time. Jonathan really is an ass I hope they kill him soon. Quick question is the thunder cunt still stuck in the wall. Neron really did throw her ass into hell or dangerously close to it.
09/04/2023 09:42Nina072
"go back in your FORKING kennel!!!!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I'm internally scream laughing, cackling like witch. Bahahahahahahaha!!!!!!
09/04/2023 09:42Lynora Crawford
Wow...I was looking forward to not having his vitriol in this installment, but now the intrigue has me enthralled once more. It also seems kind if poetic, that they have to go against him until the end. I'm really looking forward to seeing how they deal with it all! 🤩
09/04/2023 09:42Analiza
In supermoon pt 2 Selene had warned Neron that he knows the link. my guess that time was Jonathan Prince oh my God it is a chaos. I cant wait of another update...😂😁
09/04/2023 09:41I wish you could update everyday Marii. I'm so in the story. The trills, the hotness. 😜
09/04/2023 09:41Nina072
holy heck..........that was extra spicy. thank god for masks in public, marii this update deserves at least two extra chili peppers. soooooo NSFW!!! great update tho
09/04/2023 09:41
Mez
WHY IS EVERYONE GETTING BLOWN UP? This brings a whole new meaning to ‘an explosive entrance’ 😂
09/04/2023 09:41
kathydor
I have love all three books so far, but I would like to see more more love and less war.
09/04/2023 09:40Nina072
ohhhh lovely update. artemis is thirsteh!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 she is parched!
09/04/2023 09:40Nina072
uh.......like.......so.......dude. like holy shirt balls.
09/04/2023 09:39Lynora Crawford
Kiya's turned into a strategist...I like it!
09/04/2023 09:39Analiza
kiya and neron's love story just blossoming but they will face dangers.. who is this woman???
09/04/2023 09:38Meaghan Prue
marii will you be taking a break this weekend from updating
09/04/2023 09:37Sherisa Weston
This was such an empowering beautiful sexual scene. I am so glad Kiya was able to recover and experience new things. The way Neron helped her was wonderful. Such lovely writing my dear author, Mari
09/04/2023 09:37
Bonib2
I love how straight forward Artemis is 🤣🤣. Oh and Aunt Essie is funny❤❤❤
09/04/2023 09:36Kecina_Janice
I’m loving the communication but the mirror scene with his positive affirmations…whew I might’ve shed a tear because it was simply beautiful 😍
09/04/2023 09:36Lynora Crawford
NO! Poor Neron... he's suffered so much. 🥺
09/04/2023 09:36Meaghan Prue
oh man uhm yeah no words right now just got nothing
09/04/2023 09:36Meaghan Prue
u know though where is artemis I mean we hear from onyx but where's our wolf girl starting to miss her
09/04/2023 09:35Meaghan Prue
the songs of miss Toni Braxton come to mind for the last two chapters
09/04/2023 09:35
