The Unexpected Luna Comments

Tammay H

Great Book. Lots to keep you on your toes!

Reader-153701

commence not comiserate

Reader-153701

Librarian not oracle

Reader-153701

Lazarus not Lorenzo

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aura no Aurora

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Alpha Damien - Elder Derek

Reader-153701

imperative not impertinent

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tied not tide

Reader-153701

Is her dad Robert or Gregory? Also, he wasn’t killed.

Mirela

p2o9 - it's a good story, with many challenges. I like how their wolves took control and marked each other against their humans wish.🤭 Love her wolf thou.

Kitty-694016

p2o9. having a strong female lead is one of the more enjoyable reads. I can add this one and the sequel to my ever growing list

middi

2h3g - he already starts with the wrong foot, let's see if his behaviour gets better

Marina Anic

2h3g I added this in my library to read,I am only at beginning,so far it's interesting.

Barb Austin

2h3g reading first two chapters it sure does looks pretty Interesting so will keep it with the many others that I want to read

Kitty-694016

2h3g. I read this book once before and enjoyed the twists and turns. A sequel would be another enjoyable read

zira

2h3g i havent find this book till now...oh my god..its exciting story ..i eager to finish it

Madelein Schoeman

2h3g - ah one of my favourite books really enjoyed how the 2 main characters tried resisting each other in the beginning loved the plot twist enter vampire king. Again another strong female lead just loving these badass ladies. Busy with book 2 hopefully it gets updated soon!

Emily

2h3g interesting story line will definitely add to my reading list! hope it’ll be exciting! fingers crossed

Jade Freeman

2h3g - the intro to the book sounds exciting so have added to my library to read in time,

Sarah Idowu

mmń

Mellony Sylvester

You started off Lazarus Son of the Devil, and then you changed his name to Lorenzo. Why is that? If you are undecided Lazarus is a better fit.

Author’s note- The revised version of the Unexpected Luna will now be under His unexpected Luna, the majority of the story will remain the same, although the ending has been changed. If you want to read the full ending but don’t want to have to reread the entirety of the novel please skip ahead to chapter 51.

Carol Diaz

here goes day 4 still can't read. I go to the to buy book. will not recommend

Notes have been added throughout the book to advise of revised version (HIS UNEXPECTED LUNA) and that BOOK 2 is incomplete. Please follow my FB AND IG pages for updates.

Carol Diaz

read chapters thumps down even when one waits still no access. will not recommend to other's

Fowler Connie

why can't I get the next chapter on this book?

Edit’s for this book have been completed. I am waiting for my editor to let me know if there’s an easier way to update it that the way the website is allowing me ( currently I can only delete one paragraph at a time and it’s taking quiet some time to fix each chapter.

Marjorie Wall

He's a colossal jerk, of epic proportions.

what is book 1?

Angelica Nicole Johnson

ten years since he's seen her? I thought it said 2 years earlier?

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ok, dropping this book. I hate reading novels and shifting all the way to all characters pov and just repeating the scene.

Alicia Hotelling

just so you know you keep switching between Elizabeth and Jessica in both books it can be confusing just wanted to give a heads up

Jazmine Pratt

when will the next update be?

Myra’s wolf is named Elizabeth, corrections have been submitted. and I’m planning on a chapter dump this weekend for An unexpected Duo

not me over here thinking that’s they’d all 3 be mates just by that weird interaction they had when Damian left Gwen with Vlad.

Melinda Smith

YES.YES..YES... SHE SAID IT FIRST... I KNEW HE REALLY DID NOT WANT TO REJE T HER.. IT IS NOT JUST THE MATE BOND FOR HIM IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT HE ALREADY LOVE HER THATS WHY HE AGREED TO WHAT SHE SHE WANTS(TO LEAVE)..

Kimberly0908

is there going to be an update soon? I am so excited to continue

Angelica Nicole Johnson

Jessica or Elizabeth? I'm confused

just a heads up for those reading BOOK 2- Last week I was super busy with a big exam and I didn’t have any time to write. I will be putting out 4 chapters this week to make up for it. The Chapters will be posted by Sunday at the latest.

Angelica Nicole Johnson

Why didn't her mother come along? I don't remember reading her mother died.

Lisa Marie

Whats the next book called?

Reader-752416

I do wanna say this sounds a LOT like another story I read already but it is already just as good so I’m super excited to see how this story progresses!

Up to chapter 7 has been edited and the chapters are under review. I am going to try and edit up to 3 chapters a night. I can’t guarantee that’ll always happen just because I am a full time employee, student, and mother, and I’m currently in the midsts of writing four new novels. Thank you all once again for your continued support! I am grateful for each and every one of you!

Lou Lou Kelly

amazing so far

Bella Jersey 2

so far alpha Sam is weak, pathetic, and selfish creature

Kuini Peehikuru

somebody kill that b#@$& Stephanie

Leonisa Padilla

Ahm just started.. So.. Let's see😊😊😊

Lady Scorcher

I haven’t finished this chapter yet but jumbling of the Greek and Roman gods r getting a but irksome. I ignored the Mars n Jupiter thing (Jupiter is Mars’ father) and Mars is the God of war not Jupiter. Now Hades??? I hope she won’t butcher my favorite myths anymore.

Neenu Varghese

good one

Bella Jersey 2

I bet we didn’t expect that

Reader-788523

this is such a great story! I love it all. when is the next few chapters coming out for the second book?

I just wanted to give you all a heads up, that I will be starting Vladimir’s story the beginning of December. That is also when I plan on republishing the edited version of the Escort. As always thank you for your support!

Analiza

i like this story....

Hey lovelies, I just wanted to keep you all updated on what’s going on. •I am currently editing the Unexpected Luna, I’m a stronger writer now that I was when I first started and I want this story to be absolutely perfect. • I am currently in the Process of writing two new novels, the Escort, and the Vampire Kings New Slave Mate. • I still plan on writing Vladimir’s story starting the beginning of December. If you have any recommendations or thoughts to make these stories better let me know!

thank you all for your continued patience as I finalize this story. TUL will be coming to an end soon, I’m think maybe 5 chapters left of the story, possibly a few more. for those that missed my update about The Escort. I decided to take a break from writing two stories at once. I was taking my attention from The Unexpected Luna and that wasn’t fair to my readers, since I started this novel first. once the Unexpected Luna is finished I will republish the Escort and continue with that story! Much love. Thanks again for your continued patience.

Thank you all once again for reading my first novel ever! Damien and Guinevere’s story has come to an end, would anyone like to read Vladimir’s story? I’ve also started a new book, make sure to check out The Vampire Kings Slave Mate. I am also working on editing the Escort and I will be republishing that soon. I truly appreciate each and everyone of you 😘

Pennylane Bartner

update?

Reader-229487

I forgot what I was reading about really

glad there was finally a update…loving the story💜

Jenn McCoy

so I like Damien and vald I see the different type of mate situation that you are writing but I guess part of me feels hurt for vald because he deserves more from her idk I get some people don't like the multiple mate thing but here it makes sense to me 2 different parts of her not just that no one said it had to be an orgy. also I feel if she mates with vald it could unlock more power

Niibeba Keteiama Williander

please dnt let Vladimir die or damien 😑😑😑😑

love the story, I can’t put it down, just alittle sad that Gwen and Damien have to hide, I hope Gwen finds the answers.. I hope your family is good and well

Am I a little confused please forgive me but, is Alex the beta or delta? 🤔 I'm sorry 😞

Jessica Cleveland

is it Lorenzo or Lazarus?

Jasmine Hazelbaker

what!!! Damien needs to hurry up n come get her n kill psycho dude….

please update soon.. I’m highly impressed with it I can’t wait to see what else you have

Jessica Cleveland

how did the baby die if Sabrina said she was protecting it right before this happened

Stephanie Cone

read through all that is available today lol. when’s the next update? anxiously awaiting the updates! thank you. love your writing!

Cathy Garrett

I’m a little behind (just got started good). Is Lazarus and Lorenzo supposed to be the same person?

Jasmine Hazelbaker

I wish it updated more! I wanna binge read this!

Jessica Cleveland

also it's been 2 weeks... isn't Jupiter coming and shouldn't she have been training with the moon goddess?

Mrs.Hyde

So is this story involving multiple mates for one she wolf?

Jasmine Hazelbaker

love this! hope damiens dad isn’t gonna be an asshat

I love this story, excited for updates! On a side note, why isn't your second book available any more? Do you have plans to revamp it?

2 new chapters added today! let me know what you think 🤔 💭

Great couple of chapters can't wait for the next

Lora Plummer

lol I forgot what I was reading 🤣 ok back to the beginning

Reader-229487

I forgot what I was reading about really

Ashleigh Morton

Patiently following along! can’t wait to see the way the story progresses.

YAY! I’m so glad Damien is in love with Gwynn!

Kids are out camping with their grandparents and I finally had sometime to myself. I hope you enjoy the two chapter update today.

I love it great update can't wait to read the next chapter you are doing a great job

Interesting story, good start! Can't wait to see if they give into the bound! What's your update schedule?

Keri Nathan

ohh luv it🥰🥰🥰

love it! I’m anxiously wait for updates. ❤️❤️❤️

rocknrollqueen91

It doesn't add up that Vladimir talks to her in Spanish when his name is Russian... although I don't know what your original written language is, so I'm not sure if I'm reading a translation or not?

nfau4714

Yup I'm invested in these characters and there story and it's only been 11 chapters lol.... excitedly waiting for the rest☺☺

I certainly think Damien will struggle if they seperate! hopefully they’ll mark each other in 2nd heat hot hot hot! 😊

nfau4714

The wait was worth it miss Marriah Catherine Perry- the backstory of Luna and Jupiter was very nicely added in. It all made sense and I am still wanting more. I gotta know how Gwynn and Damien come out of this🙈🙉🙊

I’ve been trying to find a new book for about a week and stumbled across this one, enjoyed it so much I didn’t realize I had read 11 chapters. loving it all. I can’t wait for more!!

Well his Dad will have a heart attack when he finds out she’s pregnant! 😂😂 loved his statement to his father about being unforgiving

YES! now for Gwynn to hear how he really feels and get on board

I’m here…. i think my issue is how these possessive, hyper sexual alphas seems to just willingly and without issue hand over their women to another “mate” it doesn’t fit, and takes away from the built up image of the original couple, taints it and makes it less hot and sexy. if that makes sense. Again I’m here and I’ll see where this goes…. thanks though for also seeing that the multiple sex partners was a no for me

not a multiple mate situation…..

I’m absolutely loving the story so far. I’m on the edge of my seat waiting for each chapter. ❤️❤️👍

Alexis Gonzales

awesome chapters!!! thanks for sharing 🙂 can't wait to read more.

love the story so far can’t wait for next update

hi so happy for the update. but I did want to bring to your attention that maybe the word you were looking to use is commemorate since commiserate means to express sympathy or pity

Wcha

great chapter can't wait for next one happy memorial day!

I love that Damien is working on fixing his fathers mistakes and that Gwens dad is open to it