Fall in Love with a Billionaire Comments
Amanda Erickson
I admire the idea of the plot and concepts of challenges presenting, but the story has a childish tone to it. You want to believe this takes place in the adult world because it’s written out that way, but it sounds like it was written by a middle schooler. This story could be phenomenal with the correct editor and proper focus on writing.
09/04/2023 21:30Sandra Saß
Did she really shortened her best friends name from Chloe to Clo? Well, that'll be a good laugh for Germans, because it sounds the same as their shortening for toilet. 🤔🤣
09/04/2023 18:37Brenda Mccroskey
didn't like the fact that the end of chapter 7 ended with out knowing about her mom and chapter 8& 9 our the same.
09/04/2023 17:10Sidney Stacy
When is the next update going to be? it’s on such a cliffhanger.
09/04/2023 09:38Margaret Wade
Just began reading it, I love it already!
09/04/2023 08:20