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Shorty
Ending is choppy. Epilogue is 5 chapters back, then the last chapter ends unfinished. I wanted to read the whole thing but I'm not touching it if it's that mixed up
02/03/2024 23:21
Tricia Freligh
x2c4 Oh this is going to be a great story. Jyst but the introduction it has me wanting to read more. I have added it.
09/05/2023 01:37
blubelle Reads
x2c4 the first chapter has me hooked
09/05/2023 01:22
x2c4 #x2c4 that is one hot introduction! I need to fan myself to cool down hahahaha I love Love LOVE Queen-of-Sarcasm-18's stories. I'm adding this story to my library as well
09/05/2023 00:58Janaki Kollepalli
x2c4...the story is really interesting... I love some office romance... specially boss and secretary...added in library
09/05/2023 00:57Leré Saunderson
x2c4 Ooh, this intro certainly seems hot. How to erase bad lovemaking memories and replace them with exquisite new ones.
09/05/2023 00:27Caitlin Sullivan
x2c4... I find the intro to this book to be quite a intriguing one. I also like that the author has a following
09/05/2023 00:25John Robinson
x2c5 I have read this book it is by one of my favourite authors. It's a contemporary unconventional love story, it's really well written and keeps you wondering right to the end if there is going to be a happily ever after.
09/05/2023 00:23Reader-431917
x2c4 I am super excited to read this book 📚 I have added it to my library almost immediately after reading the introduction
09/05/2023 00:20Aisha Ali
x2c4 super hot introduction had to take a moment to make myself comfortable before starting it
09/05/2023 00:17
Joele G
x2c4 the story plot pulls your attention in from the start; wonderful author wonderful writing; it got me wondering who is “him” must find out who is it
09/04/2023 23:57icuovrthere
x2c4 the brief intro pulls you in and wanting to know who "him" is and why it's relevant
09/04/2023 23:49
Nims karunarathne
x2c4 I love her books well written and even the titles are very catchy. definitely gonna add this novel too
09/04/2023 23:47Faye Marie Rose
your book has chapters 1-38 then epilogues 1 & 2 then chapters 47-50. so what happened to chapters 39-46? is this completed?
09/04/2023 22:36
deb
will you be updating ?
09/04/2023 22:17Parwan Kaur
dear author after chapter 38 the book is missing chapters from 37 to 46 and then after 50 it goes to epilogue but it's not in arrange order...please look into it
09/04/2023 10:35Stacy Raeanne Bettis-Metzen
is there a sequel coming for this?
09/04/2023 08:55
Bella Jersey 2
I’d be pissed too. here I am gonna marry asshole. now you tell me you love me and he looks like a bigger asshole 23
09/04/2023 08:53Bella Jersey 2
he doesn’t deserve her. now that got exactly what it deserved
09/04/2023 08:52Bella Jersey 2
bad doctor not allowed to do that 35
09/04/2023 08:51Bella Jersey 2
it doesn’t matter cause he doesn’t love her 32
09/04/2023 08:51Bella Jersey 2
i think dickless might behave better now. him and mom might talk about their favorite tv show? 20
09/04/2023 08:50Bella Jersey 2
oh god Blaze we so need you right now 16
09/04/2023 08:49the chapters repeat!?!?!!
09/04/2023 08:49Bella Jersey 2
thank you Juilette let’s open the door for Matt 19
09/04/2023 08:48Where's the rest!? I need it!
09/04/2023 08:47Bella Jersey 2
so happy
09/04/2023 08:47Bella Jersey 2
Blaze don’t kill that. I’ll do it with pleasure. dickless you took a half a step up
09/04/2023 08:47Bella Jersey 2
I don’t know Blaze I’m pulling for Max. I’m sorry he’s a cutie 21
09/04/2023 08:44Bella Jersey 2
dear lord ladies and gentlemen please buckle your seatbelt 2
09/04/2023 08:43Bella Jersey 2
mission accomplished 30
09/04/2023 08:41Bella Jersey 2
oh boy we are gonna get a new groom and dickless in his place 15
09/04/2023 08:38Bella Jersey 2
I think that kiss messed both of them up 12
09/04/2023 08:37Bella Jersey 2
keep winning the Mom with all the little she’s willing to do 12
09/04/2023 08:37Bella Jersey 2
yes tell that it’s invited 29
09/04/2023 08:37Bella Jersey 2
let’s send that some lillies it will enjoy them
09/04/2023 08:37Bella Jersey 2
I thought dickless was bad but that is worse
09/04/2023 08:36Bella Jersey 2
bravo girlfriend bravo 33
09/04/2023 08:36Bella Jersey 2
I’m kicking Blaze in his balls 31
09/04/2023 08:36Bella Jersey 2
it does not sound like that rain is calming them down 21
09/04/2023 08:35Bella Jersey 2
new guy to want to kick in his Teeny tiny ball. Blaze is not gonna let him hurt our girl 13
09/04/2023 08:34Bella Jersey 2
good luck sleeping Casanova 10
09/04/2023 08:34Bella Jersey 2
I think Blaze is finally opening up and allowing himself it’s okay to admit you care
09/04/2023 08:34Bella Jersey 2
I don’t see a problem if Juliet is waken up by Max 7
09/04/2023 08:34Bella Jersey 2
she made a huge hit on the family 5
09/04/2023 08:33Bella Jersey 2
but no real foreplay
09/04/2023 08:33Bella Jersey 2
the mom has some real problems. the part I hate nobody to protect her. 17
09/04/2023 08:33Amanda Caruana
this book was the best!! loved it
09/04/2023 08:31absolutely loved it! reading it again
09/04/2023 08:31
Sonia McLeod
Thank you so much enjoyed the story 😘😘🇬🇧
09/04/2023 08:29XxPandaGamingXx 560
ok, I read chapter 10 and it ended with Blaze and Juliette going to bed then in chapter 11 Diane is in the chapter, what happened?
09/04/2023 08:28seriously I love this book! I have read it a couple times now. I keep it in my library. 🤗
09/04/2023 08:28Bella Jersey 2
if she’s happy. let’s call mom she can tell dickless 38
09/04/2023 08:26I liked the story but what’s with the “not a chapter” chapters and the repeat chapters near the end? 🤔🤔🤔
09/04/2023 08:25Bella Jersey 2
yes I need to know why Mom choose him over her daughter. I’m Mom I tell my kids I like everybody. I just love you more 14
09/04/2023 08:24Bella Jersey 2
uh oh another person gonna fall completely in love with Juliette. Blaze if you don’t wake up Max will gladly take your place 13
09/04/2023 08:24Bella Jersey 2
Blaze might kill the groom to be 7
09/04/2023 08:24Bella Jersey 2
wasn’t nice how mom’s all cool share a room. I have feeling that didn’t happen last. 5
09/04/2023 08:23Natalie Anne Madsen
loved this book. I could not put it down.
09/04/2023 08:23Clarissa J. Moore
I loved the story and read it in record time. There was only one issue...something missing between chapters 10 and 11. Some type of interaction with Diane, Juliette and Blaze occurred but was left out. Your dear readers were left with questions of what happened. Other than that, I truly enjoyed the book.
09/04/2023 08:23Bella Jersey 2
thank you Blaze let dickless borrow your phone so he can call mom
09/04/2023 08:23Bella Jersey 2
oh he’s not only dickless. it is a dickless loser. I don’t even like Diane and I feel sorry for her being with that. talk about faking it 24
09/04/2023 08:17Loving the story so far, can't wait to read more! But I think there's a missing chapter between 10 and 11. End of 10 is them sharing a bed for the first time and 11 starts with them talking about an interaction with Diane...or did I miss something? Help🤗
09/04/2023 08:17Bella Jersey 2
waiting on baited breath
09/04/2023 08:16Bella Jersey 2
Seth was right 34
09/04/2023 08:16Bella Jersey 2
excuse me you have 20 unhourglass figures to as to come that. hold up I look through the list myself
09/04/2023 08:15Bella Jersey 2
I think dickless is gonna need the name of a good plastic surgeon. I’m sure Diane knows someone 20
09/04/2023 08:15Bella Jersey 2
oh dickless I wouldn’t be so cocky. if she had a chance at Blaze. she dump your worthless ass
09/04/2023 08:14Bella Jersey 2
poor Julliet has it bad and I think Blaze is heading in the same direction 8
09/04/2023 08:14Bella Jersey 2
won Mom and Blaze she saw something as simple as sharing a bed made his mom happy 6
09/04/2023 08:14Bella Jersey 2
I think Diane was born dumb. I mean read a room girlfriend. 11
09/04/2023 08:14Bella Jersey 2
Blaze almost sounds like he’s jealous 11
09/04/2023 08:14
Mrs.Hyde
What is the story about??? Can someone give me a quick synopsis?
09/04/2023 08:12Bella Jersey 2
Juliette just knocked him on his ass
09/04/2023 08:02
Lauren
I loved this ! great work 🥰
09/04/2023 07:36Igottanuff
great story. loved it
09/04/2023 07:33I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Read it all in a day! It was well written and it had captivated me to the very end.
09/04/2023 07:33I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Read it all in a day! It was well written and it had captivated me to the very end.
09/04/2023 07:33
Caressa Cooper
Great Story but I sure wish there were a few more chapters.
09/04/2023 07:31
terri4388
loved the story! could not put it down!
09/04/2023 07:26
Madelyn Cuadrado
Hi, so I'm reading chapter 13 and it feels like I missed something? Chapter 11 and 12 were a duplicate of chapter 10. Or is it something on my end....
09/04/2023 07:24
