Blue eyed she wolf and the beta Comments

Sharon D'souza

i liked the concept. but the story is poorly written. there could be better story development.

Nims karunarathne

g9j0 this is nice story, but it would have been nice if it was properly edited and smooth.

Joele G

g9j0 love the intro of this story; a different take to the normal of the storyline where it’s about the alpha and a female lead; great start so far

Sharon Dsouza

#g9j0# a great start though the chapters are short and so is the book but i most certainly will read it now

Kaylyn Swanson

g9j0 it is nice to see an introduction that is positive for a change, most books on here have a dark intro, hopefully nothing bad happens with Molly, can't wait to find out!

Julie Mejia Zertuche

g9j0 this on is different from other were Wolf stories I have read, seems intriguing. can't wait to read more

John Robinson

g9j0 The first few chapters of this book are quite short and it's a fairly short completed book. I'm looking forward to it being a simple love story after reading the first few chapters.

Sammy

g9j0 It's a sweet story and the book itself is completed with short with limited chapters which I sometimes personally prefer. I don't enjoy overdrawn out slow burn. Unfortunately I could not connect with the story or the author's style of writing. Hoping the author gets some assistance with proofreading. Good luck.

Bizzybee🐝🌸

g9j0 this book sounds like it’s good I’m putting it in my library I love books love this one

Gamer Play

#g9j0# a promising story. I'd read it soon it is going to my library!

Caitlin Sullivan

g9j0....this is such a refreshing intro. I agree with some other comments that I like it's lead is a beta and they appear to want to treat each other well

Karooke

g9j0 toll, endlich mal ein Buch, wo nicht immer der Alpha der Gefährte ist.. Natürlich bin ich neugierig auf die Geschichte

Me Myself

g9j0 so far so good, it seems like a typical werewolf story, everyone wants to find their mate...hoping for some interesting twists

Bianca Bratu

g9j0 I love this story even from the intro it sounds like it could be an interesting book. i will surely continue reading it

blubelle Reads

g9j0 good

Jenna Mc Augustine

g9j0 this is an amazing book. if you haven't read it i think you should. her friends an ass

Janaki Kollepalli

g9j0... till now all sweet and mushy... let's see what is the twist in the story...

Reader-431917

g9j0 although the introduction is short is has caught my attention because it does not focus only on the alpha but the beta :)

Emily

g9j0 sounds like a sweet story but the chapters are pretty short which is fine but I’m looking more into longer books

Vicki usher

g9j0# finally a book that seems to be happy and different. we all haves days were this kind of story is just what we need

Gemma Butler

g9j0 This book sounds like it could be interesting. I've added it to my library to read later.

Reader-350476

g9j0 This is really interesting,usually it’s always Alpha mated to omega but I guess it’s a different story and kinda interesting to read

g9j0 #g9j0 it's good to read a love story about a beta instead of an alpha. the introduction is short but captivating.

Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

g9j0 Nice and sweet story. It needs serious editing, though. It would also benefit from a faster pace.

Molly H

g9j0 this book seems like it might be slightly different from other werewolf stories. I might add it to my library

Irma Beck

g9jo loving the start if the story so far. really interesting from the start. looking forward to the story unfolding

Ashley

g9j0 It caught my attention because it focuses on the beta instead of the Alpha like most werewolf books do.

puppy

g9j0 always good to see an new kind of story. looks like it needs to update though. 🤷

Krystal Moffett

g9j0 - Writing if here since it's disappeared. Seems like a good book. Look forward to reading more

yes sir

g9j0 I'm excited to read to the end it's new and refreshing

Michibeba

#g9j0# it’s a nice and sweet introduction and the beta being the main is a nice touch, hopefully the story doesn’t devolve into fights and weirdness

John Robinson

g9j0 I'm hoping this is a simple love story after reading the first few chapters. The chapters are fairly short and so is the story which I don't mind.

Megan Phillips

g9j0 the introduction for this book sounded so interesting that I decided to read a few chapters and so far it doesn't disappoint!

Dana Harley

I really enjoyed this story but I didn't like the ending it leaves you hanging in limbo waiting for more of the story!! 🤬🤬😡😡

Jamesis Shepherd

is there going to be a book 2

Victoria Krechting

uh HE put on some pumps

Wcha

noooo I'm so sad layla died 😭

Reader-537396

they are talking about things be better once they have marked each other but didn’t they do that when they first met

Wcha

hope bella doesn't go all crazy and they don't make sense as friends

Wcha

bellas annoying I'm assuming she'll.be killed off

Ashley Kilgore

So I just read this book, and let me tell you.. I loved every bit of it!! such an amazing writer! I hope to read more

Necer Anna Liza

omgi like it alot hope to read more,

Reader-014332

omg I loved it!! I was so turn on , all time I was reading the story and read it the story in one day!! Congratulations!!

Jennifer Ballard

@Laura Francis can you explain the “haze?” It’s not a phrase I’ve come across before, but I’m relatively new to the genre.

Brandy Lynn Moore

I'm enjoying the new twist! are you planning on exploring Molly's heritage?

Minithe Libra

more please.. very nicely written. can't wait for more

Deezory

I'm so sad this book is done😭But it was amazing... thank you

Jennyjen

love this story!!! thank you for updating as much as you do!!!!

Maria Svedinger Andersson

Is there a schedule for the uppdates?

christal whiteside

Wait...I thought they met already and they told each other their names, so why is she acting like she never met her mate?

lunalightqueen

amazing storyline I'm sad it ended but a good yummy ending

that writer blossom

my new book I am writing is called .... “the she wolf and his many selves” .... just uploaded the first chapter x x x enjoy

Christina Holden

so good can’t wait for latest update

Shauna Carpenter

would love more shifter books by this author

Reader-417761

I wish you would do a sequel to this one it was so good

Lovelylittlereader

I never read this before but I think bella is gonna be a traitor and try to get molly killed like how it is in other stories but idk I never read this, reply if u think the same

Olivia McCormick

I like it😁😁😁😁😁...but totally need more chapters!!!

Brandy Lynn Moore

when Molly wakes up someone's going to die!!!

Shauna Carpenter

omg I loved this book and would love more like it thank you to the author

Brandy Lynn Moore

great ending but what happened to Betty?

Shauna Carpenter

I love this book can’t wait for the finish of it

Reader-417761

Ahhhh please hurry

Christina Holden

I can’t wait to see the rest of this story!!!!!

Brandy Lynn Moore

so love how this chapter is even better than the last.. great chapter

Brandy Lynn Moore

this chapter is a teaser...ugh. I'm hanging on the end of my seat

Caci Amelia Stegemen

when does more chapters come out

Deezory

omw I hope nothing bad happens to Molly 😡

Amanda Jade

I can not wait for the update!!

Brandy Lynn Moore

I love the confidence and growth of Molly's character...you have me excited for the next chapter. Best story I have read in a while. I usually wait to read before bed but you've got me check throughout my day!!!

Alexis Marquez

love the twist . please update soon lol so excited 😆

edisamc2

love the story! hate that Bella allready.